It's a lovely vignette, and I can just see it taking place.
One suggestion, for the benefit of the random reader -- exposition as to just who's been locked up (and why, if needed), might add to clarity and depth because otherwise it can leave people wondering.
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Date: 2006-05-01 07:24 pm (UTC)One suggestion, for the benefit of the random reader -- exposition as to just who's been locked up (and why, if needed), might add to clarity and depth because otherwise it can leave people wondering.
(And yes, I found that which was hidden.)